My Brand New Sig [Rate] & Give [Advice]

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My Brand New Sig [Rate] & Give [Advice]
  1. Unread #1 - Jan 25, 2009 at 6:05 PM
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    Well, to be honest, this is the most time I've spent on a signature, I never really do art like this, but I thought I'd give it a try. Please rate it and give me some good advice, I will be making more soon, I just have to get a hang of PhotoShop.

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    Looks nice, sort of like a buisiness card.

    The signature should lead your eye to the focal, not distract the eye in many directions. Try using some blending to make the text flow, also, make the text vary in size, colour, etc., in one direction of course.
     
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    does look like a card >< but text looks kinda blurry
     
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    Right side of the sig looks too simple and plain.
    And the white border looks too bright/thick.
     
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    Thanks, I'll fix the text soon.
     
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    i like it... but, as evon said, looks like a bussines card xD

    giving efects tto the text should fix it
     
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    Really nice, and yea, it looks like a business card lol.

    Only thing that should be worked on is the text. Otherwise, it's good.
     
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    The only reason why it looks like a buisness card is because of the upper right corner doesn't have a lot of effects on it. I'll try to see what I can put up there.
     
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    Maybe try using different Wave effects while setting the layer style all around. That might change things up a bit.

    I would also suggest maybe an effect c4d, with some parts erased, opacity down, and layer style changed.
     
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    Abstract and elegent very nice job but i agree with people above me does look like a business card more than a signature.
     
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    personally i would add some more brushes and put drop shadow or some kind of effect on the text. also different font. :)
     
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    wowserz ...second sig is pretty much ownage
     
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    Yeah. Buisness card, but i like it, im working on a sig too :D
     
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