Poetry.?

[akotohsicax]

I did not wrote this.
but i just made this thread so people can share one of there favorite poems or poems they have made and explaining it to other people
i personally like this one since it connects to an important time of my life .
relaxation xD

beautiful eyes open across a pillow top;
It seems for this moment time will stop;
The earth slows and sounds wane;
A cold moment without hurt.

Your soul close to mine
Our hearts beat in time
With a smile of simple pleasure
This moment should last forever

Some say perfection is unattainable
For most things that's explainable
But in your arms and with your hearts affection
I have found a brief moment of pure perfection

 

[Fun to stay at the ymca]

I did not wrote this.
but i just made this thread so people can share one of there favorite poems or poems they have made and explaining it to other people
i personally like this one since it connects to an important time of my life .
relaxation xD

beautiful eyes open across a pillow top;
It seems for this moment time will stop;
The earth slows and sounds wane;
A cold moment without hurt.

Your soul close to mine
Our hearts beat in time
With a smile of simple pleasure
This moment should last forever

Some say perfection is unattainable
For most things that's explainable
But in your arms and with your hearts affection
I have found a brief moment of pure perfection

Pretty cool poem dude...

Who wrote it ?

 

[BoxWood]

http://box-wood.deviantart.com/journal/

Just started my dA, got one of my pieces in it.

It's made as a song but still sounds pretty cool.

 

[reddogwwa]

I did not wrote this.

haha I can tell. Jk but thats a pretty good poem where did you get it from?

 

[Arya]

It's called A Perfect Moment, by Ian Pires.

 

[★Simplicity★]

Not bad.

Cheesey enough I like poetry.

I just like rhyming things, sending them to my girlfriend, and then she loves me even more.