the text is a main problem. You have that grammar issue (lol), and the text is positioned weird. 'Where else can she go' should all be inside the Signature frame. Otherwise, it's not half bad.
I do not like the text the overall text.
you should remove the bevel on the first one, and i don't believe the brushing on the side does not go well with the image.
I think the correctly spelled version of the sig, with the text inside the frame, looks better. Also the bevel doesn't look attractive. Overall it's a 8/10 signature though.
Much, much better without the bevel. Am I the only one that isn't feeling the brush on the side? It looks so... out of place. I'm not over-keen on the text placement either.
The text is kind of a disaster, the brush(I think) on the edge of the signature was a good idea but the brush itself doesn't really match, and the girl in the signature was cut out somewhat sloppily.