my try.

[ProudCheater]

well this first time i ever used photoshop or any type of GFX thing.

i tryed anoy tips to make it better, and i know it sucks.

 

[bizcuits21]

I actually kinda like it, just remember that when smudgung, smudge with a flow, all pointing towards the same thing, and not in random areas.

 

[The True Gears]

Nice smudging imo, but typically the GFX forums around here are based around signiture work, and you most likely would want to look into it, because they are small, but can teach alot and make a decent design in the end.

 

[FattBoy008]

Totally agree with bizcuits, the smudging is all over the place, there should be a direction.