But yea you need a focal point. Somewhere of focus, thus meaning where everything is focused, where all the attention is. If you don't understand now I really think you should stop making graphics. =/
I dont wanna stop making Graphics, It's alot of fun. By saying what you said earlier isnt going to get the GFX section any more active. I might suck but I'll get better in do time.
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new one
added some text not very good but its okay for a first try. Added some side borders as well.