A very sombre piece.

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A very sombre piece.
  1. Unread #1 - Jan 30, 2008 at 1:22 AM
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    A very sombre piece.

    I first hesitated to post this, as I felt negative feedback for the amount of negative space was definetly a possibility.

    Edit: ill post update
    After looking at it for a while it seems to become brighter.

    v1
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  3. Unread #2 - Jan 30, 2008 at 1:26 AM
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    A very sombre piece.

    Ok well, technique is fairly easy, and you've just brushed a few symbols on the sides, reduced the opacity, and added a pattern.
    Though, it's much better than your last piece
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jan 30, 2008 at 3:40 AM
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    A very sombre piece.

    You went way too overboard with negative space <_< I also can't read the text, there's nothing to it, it's just... empty.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jan 30, 2008 at 12:22 PM
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    A very sombre piece.

    Im actually thinking that either theres something wrong with my monitors brightness. I can read it fine.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jan 30, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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    A very sombre piece.

    I can see Xja. Actually on V1 I can see some stuff to the left of the fire. Are you new to PS? Because your work is simple, but I can see your getting somewhere. Keep going and you will be amazazing.
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jan 30, 2008 at 5:57 PM
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    A very sombre piece.

    If you're viewing it on a mac, the screens tend to be brighter than on a PC, so more of the detail is obvious. The angle you view the screen at can change an image's appearance, too.
     
  13. Unread #7 - Jan 30, 2008 at 6:43 PM
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    A very sombre piece.

    I see vro xja. Thats about it.
     
  15. Unread #8 - Jan 31, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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    A very sombre piece.

    I'd rather be simple than chaotic.
    I see you chose the later.
     
  17. Unread #9 - Jan 31, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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    A very sombre piece.

    Lol I can make simple as well o_O
     
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