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  1. Unread #1 - Dec 27, 2007 at 6:32 PM
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    INTRODUCTION
    Not just any ordinary man. But the man of Jefferson Analspring himself. He was a fine young lad, nicely prepped anus I must add. I, living on a cotton plantation, and him, being a black cotton picker, our love had to be secret. I liked the thought of forbidden love. Before I had even met my Jeffy-kins, I had dreamed of catching a glimpse of a black man's anus. Often I read stories of black men who hid diamonds in their enlarged rectums. Late into the night I would read these stories, often dozing off into a dream in which those diamonds were replaced with my penis. That tight black anus surrounding my genitals. Then I would usually wake up in a cold sweat and a very wet jockstrap.

    CHAPTER 1 - The Pain of Love (short)

    "GET TO WORK YOU FUCKING SLACKOFFS..." I heard one morning as I was just arising from bed. "JEFFERSON GET YOUR FAT ASS OVER HERE," I heard an overseer say, followed by the crack of a whip. Then followed a scream, which I instantly recognized as Jefferson's. The scream of my lover. I bolted to the door, trying to remain calm. No one had the right to lay a finger on my lover.

    CHAPTER 2 - Forbidden

    COMING SOON
     
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  3. Unread #2 - Dec 27, 2007 at 6:37 PM
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    Thats nice.

    If you wrote this, its ok.. but try to take out some of the things that explain dialog like "he said" or "so and so said"
     
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  5. Unread #3 - Dec 27, 2007 at 6:39 PM
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    hahahahahahahahahahaha

    I'm going to continue this just for you
     
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  7. Unread #4 - Dec 27, 2007 at 7:34 PM
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    weird lol
     
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  9. Unread #5 - Dec 27, 2007 at 7:52 PM
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    Continue! That gave me an orgasm
     
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  11. Unread #6 - Dec 27, 2007 at 8:11 PM
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    do it! lol i thought you were serious and was being nice but now that i know your not its really fucking gay. Not very poorly written, though.
     
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  13. Unread #7 - Dec 27, 2007 at 8:20 PM
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    Really? That was just freewriting, or whatever you'd call writing a homosexual erotic story off the top of my head..
     
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  15. Unread #8 - Dec 27, 2007 at 8:21 PM
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    mmm the thought of giving you an orgasm through my stories gives me intense pleasures.
     
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  17. Unread #9 - Dec 27, 2007 at 8:26 PM
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    bewbs
     
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  19. Unread #10 - Dec 27, 2007 at 8:31 PM
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    Blacks... pick cotton...
    I wish.
     
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  21. Unread #11 - Dec 27, 2007 at 10:25 PM
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    lmao....
     
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  23. Unread #12 - Dec 28, 2007 at 12:42 AM
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    kinda weird, but actually not too bad a story.
     
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  25. Unread #13 - Dec 28, 2007 at 12:43 AM
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    Prove it! Trole Tier 1 Prizebox Tortoise Penis Le Monkey UWotM8? Wait, do you not have an Archer rank? Potamus

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    I vote WoW Blows is gay.
     
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  27. Unread #14 - Dec 28, 2007 at 12:47 AM
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    I vote WoW Blows is gay.
     
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  29. Unread #15 - Dec 28, 2007 at 12:53 AM
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    Who's gay?

    Oh yeah, WoW Blows.
     
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  31. Unread #16 - Dec 28, 2007 at 1:11 AM
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    WoW blows me hehe soz
     
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  33. Unread #17 - Dec 28, 2007 at 2:30 AM
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    Joewnn, your gay tendancies are starting to scare me. :eek:
     
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  35. Unread #18 - Dec 28, 2007 at 2:37 AM
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    WoW blows is gay.... hmm. I'm sure the comic appeal will run out eventually...

    LIKE 1 FUCKING YEAR AGO!
    SPAMZ1!11!!!1
     
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  37. Unread #19 - Dec 28, 2007 at 4:03 AM
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    Man i wish i were you...
     
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  39. Unread #20 - Dec 28, 2007 at 9:50 AM
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    Wow blows is gay.
     
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