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  1. JIM TIM JOHN

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    I wrote this song, I think the meaning is pretty obvious, but I'd like your input on what it means.

    What can I do-
    When all that I think-
    Just puts my mind on the brink-

    OF DESTRUCTION (screamo-ish)

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    The stuff in brackets is a background singer
    Millions of deaths everywhere
    [Thanks to our nation's propriety]
    Just because they just don't care
    [For fear of a decadent society]
    All the facts they just won't hear
    [They unworthy of notoriety?!?]
    They'd rather live their lives in fear
    (screamo-ish)[The fear of a decadent society]

    Red, White and Black will murder you!
    The Red, White and Blue will do it too!
    No matter what you do
    You're just a Jew!

    If you get sick?
    JEW! off to the camp!
    don't wear a glove?
    JEW! off to the camp!

    Red, White and Black will murder you!
    The Red, White and Blue will do it too!
    No matter what you do
    You're just a Jew!

    Polititicians care more about their reputations
    Then curing these indispositions

    If you get sick?
    JEW! off to the camp!
    don't wear a glove?
    JEW! off to the camp!

    Red, White and Black will murder you!
    The Red, White and Blue will do it too!
    No matter what you do
    You're just a Jew!
     
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    Roflrolfrofl
     
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    Well...if you ever make it famous you won't be able to sell your cd's to wallmart without censoring the HELL out of them, that's for sure.

    Also, it honestly doesn't make sense to me. I mean, you say jew an awful lot, and also refer to america and how corrupt it is. Is there even any correlation between jews and america besides the death camps back in world war 2?

    Also I don't ever remember americans killing other jews/americans just because there was somthing wrong with them.


    What were you thinking lyrically when you wrote this?
     
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    Here's what I was trying to do:

    Jews = Cancer and AIDS patients
    (If you get sick?
    JEW! off to the camp!
    don't wear a glove?
    JEW! off to the camp!)
    (Polititicians care more about their reputations
    Then curing these indispositions)

    And the whole premise was about the legalization of marijuana, and although some states have legalized it, I decided to write a song anyway.
    (Millions of deaths everywhere
    [Thanks to our nation's propriety]
    Just because they just don't care
    [For fear of a decadent society]
    All the facts they just won't hear
    [They unworthy of notoriety?!?]
    They'd rather live their lives in fear
    (screamo-ish)[The fear of a decadent society])

    I am also thinking about adding a really screamo part that goes like this:

    Destuction around you
    Is destruction within you
    And Destruction around me
    IS DESTROYING THE INSIDE OF ME
     
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    You should post a little video or audioclip of you singing the song to the best of your abilities, that would be fun :)
     
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    MANNN

    THATS SO DEEEEEPPPPPPPPP


    FUCKIN SICK ANTI FLAG DEEP REFLECTIVE POLITICAL SHITRIGHT THERE BRO

    about 1 million outta 10 :D:DD:D
     
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    I'll try to sometime this week.
     
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    The lyrics are pretty good, the way I imagine the song it would come out pretty nicely The only thing is the whole Jew part. The lyrics are pretty well written I'd come up with something better than just "Jew" With something like that it just kinda brings it all down.
     
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    Well I was really trying to liken it to the holocaust and I don't really see a better
    way than how I did it. =/
     
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    UMMM i really would not like to hear this song.... really .... just my taste though,,,,, (screamo-ish)
     
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    It's not all screamo-ish, it's kind of like System of a Down, with soft parts and screamo parts and regular parts.
     
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    bump ;]
     
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    i think ya title shud be


    "daaaaaaaaaaaaamn that jew just stepped on mah J'z"

    catchy
     
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