CnC Once More..

Yeah, the font needs a bit of work, but I think I've done a fairly good job, eh?

CnC ONLY please. As I've posted many times before, please post only if you know what you're talking about, and please use proper grammar.

Discuss.

 

could you show the originals, it looks liek you just slapped a render on, and added a lens flare..

 

Lighting - there are wayyyy too many light sources. Try making one light source and make your renders face glow from the direction the light is coming from.
Depth - there is absolutely no surface to the sig, it's just plain. Try blurring some parts to almost make it look like a photograph, it makes it look much more realistic
Render - The render needs to be blended in. He's just standing there looks like he was almost just slapped on. Try blending the colors to match with him. The flow of the sig is alright since I know which render you used, but try adding more effects to it.

Otherwise, you're improving.

 

Thanks guys. Yeah, the render has multiple light sources, so I couldn't really add a direct light source, my bad :| argh, working on some new versions..