2nd layout ever!

[BlakaGFX]

I think it came out pretty good. Gimme some comments how i could improve it

 

[Cas]

Text is not very readable.
Examples too small and not to scale, their backgrounds shouldn't be visible.

Other than that, looks pretty solid

 

[BlakaGFX]

Text is not very readable.
Examples too small and not to scale, their backgrounds shouldn't be visible.

Other than that, looks pretty solid

Just slapped the Examples there Will be editing it

 

[Pokeh]

It's nice but it's negotiated

 

[Thor]

I like it quite much but personally i think its somethink i don't like about the bottom part. But i can't point out what! But the rest i love, especially the top part.

 

[Ayy]

Very very nice for a second layout.
Try to make future ones larger, and change up the grey text.

 

[xPhilip]

Should keep the colors on the top background effects continuing to the bottom rather then the green (IMO). Otherwise it looks very nice.

 

The text doesn't suit the background. Overall a great second piece though. The effects are well done but the layout itself could be larger.

 

[Matty ICE]

Once again very nice, however I like your V2 better

 

This isn't too bad, in all honesty. I would suggest that you use a color other than grey when writing on light blue. Nice work.

 

[BoxyBox]

I like it alot, i just find the Chains Necessary and Text Colour could be fixed a tad to attract the viewer a bit more.

 

[RichTwo]

Looks very good. Though the text isn't very readable.