1st play with C4d

You really need to improve on perspective my friend. The angle of the text and how jumbled it looks can easily be fixed if you learn how to align and space out your letters properly.

Try to start making the text on an angle like you would be looking at it in front of you. Space out the letters so they don't overlap as much. The lighting and colours are decent but try to improve on making the graffiti font more legible.

 

It's illegible. You might be able to read it since you made it but at a glance I can't tell what it says.

Rase One Original is a cool font but as Zippy said, if you are going to overlap make sure it isn't overly so.

Here is an example of one done well

 

so i have made 2 more since this one cnc would be great: http://www.sythe.org/graphics-gallery/1633244-new-sig-beginner-please-cnc.html

 

Needs better placement. I wouldn't be able to understand what it said if it wasn't your name.

 

What one are you talking about BGlave. Thank for the time you took to write some feedback. I'm assuming its the first one and i totally agree been a week since i did it and i hate it

 

May as well be made in anything other than C4D. Focus on more basic shapes to learn the fundamentals brotha