Real Person

thx SMI

 

i like the 2nd best =]

8/10
9/10
7/10

 

2nd one looks more crisp and clear, so that would be my favorite. Colors look good, not too bright, not too dull, and like always good flow with the text and nice font choice. Good job.

 

1st 7/10
2nd 9/10
3rd 9/10

 

something I didn't notice the first time you showed me this. After the color change, there is an almost gull-shaped glitch in your lower left corner, next to the word, 'lust.' Should be touched up.

 

meh its k but ionno, at has something thats not right to it.

 

I know im just lazy atm I fixed it in v3 though. it was a left over from the trace contour.