Rate my short test PK video :P

I only spent an hour recording these kills, so don't expect anything spectacular, but this is my first video, and certainly won't be the last.

Rate/Hate, Comment, whatever; Just please don't spam. (To ensure you're not bolstering your post count, include a point in time you're referencing in all of your comments. NO posts like "Cool vid d00d", a post which could be made while just cruising on by.)

http://youtube.com/watch?v=83HYsA0vH94

Rate it.

 

Nice for a first time !

 

Thank you =)

What do you think I could change, aside from adding more kills? Should I stay with the style i've got going where I have a bit of a 'backstory' to the kills, or just do straight combat, a bit before the KO?

Most videos go with the latter, they start the clip halfway through fights.

 

makes me wanna go kill myself jk its horrible ...jk again.......get more clipS gj tho

 

that was pretty nice btw wats the range and combat lvl of it

 

thats actually really good for ur first video

 

very nice......ill be looking forward to more??hopefully

 

i dont think it was good first of all u dont skull whats pkin without risk..

 

nice i dont think you should of used that music for a slow paced pk video

 

Hmm ok, you need to cut the long bits out, and dont know why you added that guy in that tele'd

 

wow nice vid it was fuuny how u owned tht tele tubie like he att u 3 times and he teled...that second guy u fought with myth i was dieing he tried to run and he died.....and the 3rd pk with the melee pure u should be carefull cause he could of had r2h and k'o u but nice vid though

 

I do skull. "/

He had an R2h lol, That's why when we were talking I said he hit 16, he tried to KO hit me in the early stages of the fight, then gave up on that because I kept constant hits on him. Both the R2H and Scimmy dropped when I killed him.


And finally, Jenna; The story behind that fight is that I was trying to lure his friend into the wild, they pjed me when I had just finished a fight with a pure ranger (level 49, 70 range), I had won that, but he teleported. Those two ran up to me in nonmulti. I was forced to run out, as I had 4 lobsters. I added both of them to ensure that I could find them / track them down for PJing me.

Ten minutes later, I hopped to the world they were in, and I began my noob act, I met those two in level 1 wild, they were talking about some pure not being a "real fighter" on their last world. I assumed they had forgotten my name already, and proceeded to taunt the 54. He agreed to fight me 1v1, but as we reached level 6 wild, his friend ran up and attacked me (the one that teleported), and for some reason, the 54 kept following me after his friend got ripped. :S

I threw it in just for kicks pretty much =).

Btw, to both of your comments to cut the long bits out / wrong music for the slow pace, when I was creating the video I thought it'd be better to give a bit of a backstory to the fights, I later found out that ALL pk videos start the clips halfway through the fight, once they look like the clear victor. I didn't want to do that at first.

I'll be adding more clips, and if it looks lame, just for you Resti, I'll add lame music



Btw, thanks for all of your comments

I'm making a new account currently, 'Staple_Bow', and I'll make a full length video once I get his stats to a decent level.

Also, the stats on my account are...
40 attack
54 strength
1 defence
66 range
4 prayer (Poor Judgement.)

47 combat.

 

Not bad for a first time

 

Thanks Dark

 

Ok for your FIRST vid, otherwise it would have blowed. Lol.

 

Didnt really like it but i kept in mind itwas your first.

 

Yeah, I think you should only enter the good kills. Like they Telly guy, shouldn't be in there. Also it looks like you're spinning the camera around WAY too much on the last guy, but very nice funny kill lmao.

Also, the quality is close to horrendous. I'm not sure if that's something you can help, but if you can DO IT. Please :S

As for the backstory, I would mix it up. The good fights (One's where you're totally owning) put backstory in there. Ifs it's a long brought out fights, just show the end.

Also, some more effects would be nice :S

 

vry nice for first time!

 

Thanks Guys , I'll do my best to fix up the video, and what sort of effects do you mean?

Btw, the movement of the camera usually occurs in tougher fights, I tried to ensure I had a clear path to him, meaning no other names under him. That makes fighting easier for me

Easier fights I can take my time and pick through the stacks of people. xD

 

Ghey/10...
Just kidding, I just wanted an excuse to say that =]


nice work m8.