gazin' the stars ~ new tag

hate/rate/meditate/rape <3​

 

Long quotes are a big no, especially when just plastering the text on with little to no attempt at blending. Because it's so blatant there's no defined focal - my eyes are drawn all over the piece.
Stock has been stretched and resized disproportionally - next time when making an image smaller or larger hold down the 'shift' key and it won't stretch.
Colouring is fairly nice, the random vector shapes and c4d's scattered across the show are not - in the future, select fewer accompanying images and c4d's and try and choose ones that compliment the stock - blending them better rather than just giving it a cut and paste appearance.

 

too be honest there is only 2 C4D`s placed and now that i think about it i see how much i fucked up thanks for posting and giving me your CnC ill post another one with more depth and less random shit all over the place.

 

Wow, I was using that stock for a signature just now.

The text is too big and doesn't fit with the sig. The guy is stretched and looks all messed up.

 

Thanks, for your crit. im going to redo the whole tag and try to make it all blend a lot better with a short text and properly resized focal.

 

Need to re-size the render better. Need to work on blending and effects. Your composition and atmosphere is nice though. Also need to work on the typography because it stands out too much.