1st Background

[sm321]

Hello. This is my first ever background. What do you think?

Version 1:



Version 2:



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[vR Pesos]

i dislike it the 2nd one is too loud and their both are very similar or they are similar but what is it does it have any meaning behind it or its just a design from scratch?

 

[kovan]

V2 is without a doubt much better,, But still there is something wrong with this piece

I think it's the chaos,, It has no composition or flow whatsoever,, this makes it looks very plain and chaotic really. There is nothing wrong with the effects used, but try to combine the effects in a way that they compliment each other

I mean you got some kind of smoke, and then you have this horizontal chaotic lines and then the squares,, this doesn't match at all

I also dislike the black background,, maybe use a black to grey gradient? or just experiment with this!

yeah,, not anything else to say really,, hope to see an improved version!

 

[runescapeobject]

V2 Looks sexy.

 

[sm321]

i dislike it the 2nd one is too loud and their both are very similar or they are similar but what is it does it have any meaning behind it or its just a design from scratch?

V2 is a brighter version of the original. It doesn't have any meaning, it's just a load of styles packed together.

V2 is without a doubt much better,, But still there is something wrong with this piece

I think it's the chaos,, It has no composition or flow whatsoever,, this makes it looks very plain and chaotic really. There is nothing wrong with the effects used, but try to combine the effects in a way that they compliment each other

I mean you got some kind of smoke, and then you have this horizontal chaotic lines and then the squares,, this doesn't match at all

I also dislike the black background,, maybe use a black to grey gradient? or just experiment with this!

yeah,, not anything else to say really,, hope to see an improved version!

Thanks, it's a sort of "mix of styles" that I threw together randomly to see the out come. I might update it sometime, but I don't know.

V2 Looks sexy.

Thankyou

 

[Tinglez]

I like the first on the best, the second one just seems to blend the color out. Maybe if you made it wider, so the edges wouldn't have to be cut off when someone wanted to make it their background, as most computers nowadays are wide.