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Tough to make out when I'm scrolling all over the place 
Try shrinking them down a bit.
Try shrinking them down a bit.
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^ What Zippy said.
But they look very very good. Very nice work mate!
But they look very very good. Very nice work mate!
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Please for heavens sake crop these pictures. I can't see them in a view full, so I wouldn't be able to give my opinion.
bigk1121
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guys quit being lazy (cmd + -) (ctrl + -)
looks good for some quick sketches. for some pens try out micron thats what i use they are good for line work.
looks good for some quick sketches. for some pens try out micron thats what i use they are good for line work.
Thank you guys for all you support hope you can see the drawings now
shouldnt had uploaded from mobile.
I will move on to draw some people now.
btw is Uni pen good to drawing?
Thanks for the answer
Appreciate you guys.
shouldnt had uploaded from mobile.
I will move on to draw some people now.
btw is Uni pen good to drawing?
Thanks for the answer
Appreciate you guys.
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The first one looks nice. It needs better composition though. I see it's body melting, but why?
The second one looks unfinished. It's rough and missing details of the face and mouth.
The second one looks unfinished. It's rough and missing details of the face and mouth.
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I'm not answering for him, but my guess would be something to do with global warming and the impact it has on the polar bears? lol :noworry:
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You misunderstood. There is no other object reflecting the effects of the polar melting. I'm fully aware of global warming and the polar bear epidemic, but there is no source in the picture that conveys the epidemic.
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The fact that it's a polar bear and it's melting...That isn't enough?
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Composition in art is important. It makes the piece look more realistic.
Quite nice 
I like. The mouth on the 2nd bear looks a bit off but the angle you choose to draw from is difficult.
You could try doing the outlines with a sharp pencil and shading the rest with a dull one. of course there are always different hardness pencils (2b, 3b, 4b etc).
Im quite a fan of "pilot fineliners" for sketching.
I like. The mouth on the 2nd bear looks a bit off but the angle you choose to draw from is difficult. You could try doing the outlines with a sharp pencil and shading the rest with a dull one. of course there are always different hardness pencils (2b, 3b, 4b etc).
Im quite a fan of "pilot fineliners" for sketching.
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Quite nice
You could try doing the outlines with a sharp pencil and shading the rest with a dull one. of course there are always different hardness pencils (2b, 3b, 4b etc).
Im quite a fan of "pilot fineliners" for sketching.
It's not as much the mouth as it is the nose that's throwing it off. If you could turn it and move it over to the left a bit, it would be great. Or you could also make the nose a bit bigger, if erasing would be a problem, and try and even it out through more strokes.
I love bears BTW, great job
