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New Tags
  1. Unread #1 - Jun 30, 2014 at 3:51 PM
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    EDIT: 3 new

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  3. Unread #2 - Jun 30, 2014 at 4:40 PM
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    Very poor composition on all of them. Should read up on flow and rules of thirds.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jun 30, 2014 at 10:41 PM
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    they're nice, but i do agree with nero on this one. Try getting your own flow mate,
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jul 1, 2014 at 9:12 PM
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    Thanks for the feedback. Upladed my newest tags. Maybe some improvement in them lul?
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jul 3, 2014 at 6:35 PM
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    Try not centering your focal and all of your effects and increasing your canvas or decreasing the size of your render.
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jul 4, 2014 at 6:27 PM
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    Looks kinda overdone, erm, maybe use less overlays
     
  13. Unread #7 - Jul 4, 2014 at 7:40 PM
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    Also -- negative space is good. Your second one has a bunch of it, but unfortunately your focal is in the middle so it isn't that noticeable. The rule of thirds is really important.

    Your third tag seems really busy so it doesn't have an obvious flow. When I first look at it my eyes really don't follow any pattern. Perhaps you should put some of it in the foreground and some in the background or do something to create a flow.
     
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