Need Help from someone strong in English Writing [Abstract][University level]

Hello, I have written a 200 word abstract based on a 3000 word article on Microprocessors (topic irrelevant). I would like to know if someone could please spare some time and look it over and see if its well done and what I can do to improve it. You can also read the article if you have the time (worth the read).

If you can help please pm me and ill send it to you <3