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I don't mind it, but personally find the colors and font a tad boring.
Extremely boring. Also don't like the depth of the text, too deep.
If your goal was carved wood, I'd say spot on!
Well, i don't know if that reflection that passes over the text fits to carved wood. But that is just my opinion, The rest looks quite good. I like it.
Its varnished. lol, jk I know what you're saying. I might consider another material but I feel like wood is fitting for now, what with my name.
I agree, I think the angle I used is a bit too steep, I think a more straight on angle may be more appealing. I wanted it to appear like you're looking up at it.
Maybe I can find a serif font to spice it up, or add better animations, or thurasi lol. I need to teach myself animation in flash.
Thanks for the feedback. I was going for something really legible and easy to read. I also like the cartoon-ish feel. The colors are pretty bland, ill agree with you on that. But for wood I dont know what else I'd do really.
tbh I didnt know you did gfx donald, do you have any work I could see?
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too much depth and weird camera placement. gj on the wood tho
I think Ill try adding a floor shadow next time and taking the angle higher.
Here's an xmas one to show off... Im certain its too big but I cant shrink it down without it looking like total shit. Edit: I think its fine because its hosted off site.
CnC maybe? Maybe just tips since there's a lot to criticize.
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Like everyone before me said it's just to plain.
Helpful... >.>
Did you see Archer and le Plank?
I like it, but I think it's a bit too small.
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Did you see Archer and le Plank?What do you think about the xmas one?
I like plank he's a beast, and the xmas one i like everything about it except the colors i don't really care for the gray to much.
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Plank ava is awesome but the sig is just a bit, idk bland? Get more saturation in there mate! Kiu!
Ya It needs a background or something for depth. Keep in mind in limited to 500x100 since im not a donor
Ive made some adjustments and will make a few more before I enter SOTM.I dont really know what to think of the snow. Its awkward because it clips around the edges but I dont think shrinking the snowy area would look any better. I really want to learn how to do a snow effect in C4D. Photoshops just no good for animation. Atleast what I know now. I essentially can just tween two images lol.
The shine? Id keep it but fix it up a bit and make it less thick, more spread out and probably not under the letters as that doesnt make much sense. I think the angle I took it at is whats really throwing the whole thing off. I might even try going for a different type of wood like mahogany or something dark which looks good varnished.
Like this, its nice and shiny.
I think I know enough to fix the OP, Please just CnC this new xmas one.
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I personally think it looks good man. Simple but has everything you need