Tag

Please give some constructive critism and how i can improve it!

V2:


This is my first tag in about a year or so so i'm still getting into it.

Yet i know:
No depth
No flow
Way too much contrast
Hard to find focal point

 

Get on skype mate,

I'll buy that siggy now

 

No flow, no depth, awful colors because you've run a photofilter or two over them and set them to contrasting way too much, and it is very sharp. You should read some tutorials on basic compositions and lighting.

 

The focal point is really hard to find here mate, add some depth in the tag overall like emporer said. That could help bring the focal out a little more, also add some flow
Other than that, it's a start keep it up!

 

Thanks, i've just started with tags so im not so good with "Flow" and "Depth" and stuff yet, but hopefully after a while i'll be better. Thanks for feedback atlas and grats on the sotm.

 

A bit hard to see whats going on in the picture, should make the guy stand out more and cut down on the effects covering him. Don't really know what's going on on the right but it could be fixed up into a real nice tag.