new sig i made

tell me what u gfx people think of this first time using photoshop in a year and going from cs3 to cs6 i got lost in the menus


heres 1 version,




version 2,



post what u think

 

i like v1 better. but v2 flows better but how you sharpened the render ruined it for me.

 

I agree.

I love the gradient map(s) that were used on v2 but the oversharpening of the render effectively ruined the piece.

Specifically I like the white lines in the background, they're a nice addition that I may have to use for the future sometime.

 

I also agree with big, but i think bigger text maybe and using the brown colour would make it more prominent