Something new

[Evilbobman]

Wanted to try something new

 

...I don't know what to say xD

 

[Emperor Nero]

I dig bro. A really interesting style. I think it would be cooler if her skin a purer white and do like some red 'X's over her eyes.

 

[Evilbobman]

I dig bro. A really interesting style. I think it would be cooler if her skin a purer white and do like some red 'X's over her eyes.

I'll try to do something with it when I get home, I really love the x's idea. The problem is that it's a really bad render, kinda washed out

 

[Emperor Nero]

I've used that stock before, a long time ago. Try using a curve and then drop a level on it and pull out some of the black with it. Theoretically it'll work. Also confine her to the inner circle. It looks bad going to the outer ring.

 

[bigk1121]

yeah i thank the skin is a bit too dark.

 

[Evilbobman]

I've used that stock before, a long time ago. Try using a curve and then drop a level on it and pull out some of the black with it. Theoretically it'll work. Also confine her to the inner circle. It looks bad going to the outer ring.

something like this looking better?

 

[Evilbobman]

Whiter version:

 

[Winnick]

Looks Pretty Cool Man. Liking All The Graphic Effects In The Picture

 

[theArc]

Looks good but I feel the light on her doesn't look right.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

Wanted to try something new

I like the whiter version way better, though it still has major composition issues - for one the symmetry of the circular backgrounds isn't really appealing in art (as perfect symmetry is extremely difficult to pull of successfully, especially in terms of geometric value). The stroke within the circles also draws attention to the edge of the circles rather than the render.

To be fair whilst I like your experimentation and attempt at diverging from the norm, be more considerate of textures (with their composition and flow), as well as just general composition. Things need to seem to 'fit' or 'go together' generally.

 

[bigk1121]

i thank it would look good if you made it look like she was printed on the paper. that might pull the design together.

 

[Jee]

i thank it would look good if you made it look like she was printed on the paper. that might pull the design together.

Same idea in my mind as well. You can have a try.

 

[KDrew Fanboy]

Retro theme

 

[LetsSell]

reminds me of borderlands, pree cool tho