Simplicity.

Blacks are crushed too much. In other words there is too much black imo. Other than that i quite like it, it fits its name.
Also I think it would be best since sythe is having problems atm with overloading memory and what not that you post all of your works in one thread and just update them.
Cheers!

 

No, no. I like the black, but the piece looks really LQ and the focal's color doesn't blend well with the rest if the piece. There also needs to be some depth established and some lighting.

 

Look's real nice from a non-graphical guys pov, however could possibly fill out the left side (Black)

 

Thanks guys.

 

To much empty space for my liking, maybe some low flair or something? Your choice however I recommend working with it some more, has much potential, and honestly it isn't bad how it is!

Great work,
-oOstarOo