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   Superman, Apr 29, 2012

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   The left side seems a little dull to me. Maybe work on improving the details on the left side.
   
   The pen tool work seems a bit off as well. It throws me off, maybe it's just be though.
   
   You should also look into creating more depth and flow as well as merging the render into the background.

    

   Janoski, Apr 29, 2012

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