New name creation

Remember, just because you work in a different style doesn't mean I do.
I'm very into the professional scene. I don't like using renders etc.

How does this look?

 

If you're more into professional style work try to use color palettes that work well together *look online for some help * the one you're using right now seem's really dull an boring IMO. I don't really like the random brushes you put behind it either.

Think out your pieces before you start working. Think about where you want your effects to be and were you want the focal to be etc. It will greatly improve your work.

KIU

 

I typically work in the rule of thirds which didn't work for me at all this time:/
And I know about the brushes, it just didn't seem right without a bunch.
Personally I liked the text alone, but I was quickly told that wouldn't do.

 

The text doesn't really seem professional and neither do the brushes that you've used. Also, the flower thing coming out of the 'B' doesn't really fit in with the rest of the image. Otherwise, I think it looks pretty cool.

 

Just added another new one... CnC!

 

With the first one, there's practically no composition and it's too basic - it just looks like a few brushes splattered onto a background behind some text etc.

Whilst you may have meant it to be monochromatic, the rest of the graphic doesn't share the same perspective approach that you gave to the text, making a problem with the composition.

Brushing's ugly, either pentool it, or try use it more subtly.

 

I argee with the brushes... someone suggested that I add them.