Thank you, and a poem.

I have worked very hard to get this section here, and I would like to give a big thanks to all the people who supported it, as well as Finn, and Sythe.

Thank you.

Now here is a simple poem about myself.

Five foot seven,
a funny man.
I can make you laugh,
like no one else can.

A strange personality,
Oh, thats just me.
I wear glasses...
So I can see...

That was a lame line,
lets spice things up,
anyone got some beer?
We can put it in a cup.

Grab the ping pong balls,
its going to be fun.
Drink drink drink,
don't try to run.

Fall down the stairs.
What a dumbass.
Go to a concert.
Backstage pass.

Have fun with friends,
hang out on sythe.
These are few things,
in my daily life.


Thank you everyone!

 

really nice, i like that rhyming structure ^^

 

thank you, sir.

 

Sythe doesn't really rhyme with life. But otherwise, good try. Is this your first time writing poetry?

 

Sythe and Life do rhyme, they don't both have to end in an eyeth sound, but with an exagerated e at the end. This is not my first time.

 

awesome

 

lol you were banned for scamming, i dont like your poem anymore faggot

 

I like this Poem, it seems more like a rap but its flows well, however what I just learned above has caused me to lose all respect for you.

 

has a rap to it ;p

 

great poem

 

good poem shame your banned.

 

This is nice, has like a little rap to it.

 

awesome

 

Is this your first poem? I mean the written style of this is off, but other than that good job.

 

You seem like a pretty cool guy, too bad you got ban hammered.