My First Ever Blog/Guide/Story. (Would love feedback)

Hello,

I am Anet390 also known as Andrew. I really love sharing my knowledge with other people, but sometimes I have trouble figuring out how to actually share it. I have a few friends who blog and love it, but at first it didnt seem too appealing to me. But this week I started writing for my college newspaper after 2 days, people are now paying me to write about current events, parties, and sports games. I am making about $100/week from this, along with my actual job of handing out samples at a Kroger (grocery store) and convincing people to buy the product. Anyway enough about that, today I wrote my first blog, it is sort of like a guide thingy, but you know... It didn't take me too long to create, but I rushed it a bit (two C's in collection in article) I really would like feedback on anything from the content of the article, right down to how I explained things. I would also like suggestions for future blogs and guides. A Facebook like or just a positive comment here helps a lot more than you can imagen!!!

http://authspot.com/short-stories/starting-a-collection/

Thanks,
Andrew

 

positive!!!! good luck with the blog/guide/story i'll be reading it

 

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Thank you. I appreciate the support.

And don't think I didn't see that triple post.
Nah I'm joking that happens sometimes when your Internet is laggy or you spam the post button. Thanks for cleaning it up though!

Andrew

 

on mah laptop not the best potato out there but it does the job

 

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Porn, Rs, Sythe, My Blogs.

Those are the only things you need access to to be a successful person!

 

amen

 

Need more feedback and such!

 

Bump!

 

People are reading it (31 views) but nobody is giving me feedback. Does that mean its perfect?

 

Got some feedback through PM thanks guys!

 

Working on new articles.

 

Bump!

 

New article being published soon!

FYI: I have gotten hired to write articles on current events for www.planetdebate.com

So i will let you know when I have a new blog there and when I have a new personal blog!

 

http://socyberty.com/society/can-we-stop-will-we-stop-do-we-want-to-stop/

I wrote this after a little bit to many beers. tell me what y'all think!

PlanetDebate is revising and editing my first blog on #OccupyWallStreet. It will be published 12:00 on Tuesday!

 

Bump!

(See new blog in post above)

 

http://computersight.com/software/p...ishing-and-how-to-keep-yourself-safe-from-it/

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Just published. Got paid $12 to write that for computersight

 

Bump!

 

depends, to actually be a successful person is alot more then "internet" i dont know exactly what your age is so i guess i wont be blaiming you

Having a work you actually like, gf/boyfriend or infact married, staying healthy, training. thats more what i would of call a successful person.

 

wow

he did just say that

btw, the blog, its bad, well speaking from an SEO standpoint, its terrible

 

I'm still working on becoming a better writer!