Another Piece

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Another Piece
  1. Unread #1 - Nov 1, 2011 at 7:55 AM
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  3. Unread #2 - Nov 1, 2011 at 4:24 PM
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    Looking very cool, tho I think the background of it shouldn't be that yellow/white, keep it a bit mysterious/evil, maybe make it red or some sort.
    Also: where are your pretty, shiny tags? Loved to see those! =(
     
  5. Unread #3 - Nov 1, 2011 at 6:19 PM
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    Lighting seems off, in that it (kind of) passes infront of her face yet that side of her face is still dark. Splatters seem LQ, and color scheme isn't that appealing.
     
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    Great effort, but it seems dis-proportionate, and the colour scheme doesn't quite work for the image you're trying to portray, my condolences if you intended it to be a quirky look, but you need to blend the background, re-size the main image and simply clean it up, the concept is great though, looks good.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Nov 2, 2011 at 1:47 AM
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    ^ i agree
    and the left and the right side dont flow together
    BUT I LOVE YOUR WORK MAN
     
  11. Unread #6 - Nov 2, 2011 at 12:29 PM
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    weak flow

    reduce saturation of eyes/mouth
     
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