i rap

oh hai dare.
i rap

and i wanted to get your opinions on it.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JGTsd-ycmm8

If you don't like rap/hiphop, don't waste your time viewing it and leaving hate comments..



EDIT: I've only been writing/rapping for about two months now, so..

 

You're pretty damn decent, you've got a unique voice.
keep trying any i think you'l go far.

 

Thanks!

 

I'm not a big rap fan but from a rap perspective it's pretty good, may I ask why you have a crying kid on your cover though?

 

Just a random picture I had on my computer, hahaha. I don't have a video camera yet.

 

In all honesty, I am pretty impressed

First of all - I love the sample you used for the song. I don't know who was covering it, but thats originally a radiohead song called Street Spirit (one of my favs). Also, the subject matter of yours songs is awesome, its from the heart and its genuine which makes listening to it 10x better. I can't stand alot of modern rap/hip hop that is all about projecting an imagine... this is much better stuff, telling stories and communicating feelings and emotions.

Keep up the good work man, very good stuff you got so far I'm listening to the Stan cover right now about your Ex... I love it! Super creative and love the concept. Good work man!

 

Your getting there bud

 

Decent,
Nice flow & choice of lyrics.

 

Not bad. U should hit me up with some downloads for your music and I'll show it to my friends

 

You know what man, the more I listen the more I like this! You got alot of talent man and you are a fantastic story teller. You should stick to that... telling stories, communicating situations that people can relate to. This is good stuff man

 

I'm a pretty big fan of rap/hip hop, and I would say that I'd buy that song if you sold it. Checking out some of your other songs now, you're good!

 

Damn, you've got some potential. (Without this sounding racist) There's tons of white rappers coming up right now, and they're kicking ass. I've been listening to Watsky, Mod Sun, Mac Miller (of course), and them Eminem will always be there.

 

nice! sick stuff nice rap voice

 

Holyshit! A lotta good feedback! I wasn't expecting all this!

It's actually a Joe Budden instrumental, who's signed to Shady Records (Eminem) and is another rapper who speaks from the heart.

and I agree with hiphop nowadays, a lotta it is full of crap.

Thanks for the listens and compliments though!

I'm learnin Practice makes perfect.

Thank you.

The link to download most of the music is in each songs description.. It just isn't in Dear Diary cause megaupload was down when I uploaded that song. I'll add a download link to it now.

Most of the shit I write about, I've been through; and although 'Those Days' is a fictional story, some parts in the song are relateable. Thank you though!

Thats awesome to hear man. Thanks a lot. As though for now, all my music is free! Download links are in the description of each video.

Yes. I agree, I think white rappers are doing hiphop better nowadays then black; since a lot of black rappers talk about the dumbest stuff. A lotta asian rappers doing it good right now too; D-Pryde, J.Reyez, etc.

Thanks!

 

No relation to the rapper named hopsin that's already around? Coincidential.
But sweet, lookin forward to downloading! Keep going!

 

You need to work on your breathing.

Also, wrong section.

 

go on x factor...? or americas got talent...? got nothing to lose

 

My rap name aint Hopsin lol.
I'm just a fan of his.

 

this is good, i would prefer if you videod yourself while you did this

 

I have a video camera, I just don't have a charger. Soon hopefully though, aha.