Second smudge entry

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Second smudge entry
  1. Unread #1 - Oct 12, 2011 at 1:53 PM
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    Second smudge entry

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    Like this one better.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Oct 12, 2011 at 6:00 PM
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    The type on the far left kills the depth for me :S
    There's two overlapping layers, both in focus... it suddenly shifts the depth to very much flat and 2 dimensional.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Oct 12, 2011 at 10:01 PM
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    I dig the atmosphere created by the colors though. Reminds of some sort of vortex or black hole.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Oct 21, 2011 at 2:32 AM
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    I can find no depth at all, and your focal is shying away from the canvas. Your flow is doing okay.
     
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