What should i do with this

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What should i do with this
  1. Unread #1 - Oct 11, 2011 at 12:28 PM
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    What should i do with this

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    heavy wip

    its a piece about illusions in the sand

    kinda corny
     
  3. Unread #2 - Oct 11, 2011 at 1:03 PM
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    What should i do with this

    I would start by defining a focal, because they're background elements but no real focal. That is just my opinion.
     
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    What should i do with this

    Change the sand texture, it's seriously repeating itself :p, doesn't look too realistic.
    Change the background too, the piramids all look the same (and probably are), the clouds in the background are simply flipped and it just doesn't look too realistic in general.. Just improve it :)
     
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    True, a lot of repetitiveness. I will keep the pyramids since they look good, kinda adds to the mystique lol. But i will fix the patterns, posting a update later.
     
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    What should i do with this

    Decide where the sun is coming from, the right two make the sun appear as if it's coming from the right, and the left one makes it seem like it's on the left.
     
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    What should i do with this

    try using less textures, and draw a bit more by hand. Everything you use is either reflected or repeated.
     
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    I don't know anything about gfx but that looks pretty cool.
     
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    If you made this I fucking love you its my new background XD
     
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