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Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by ProudCheater, Oct 11, 2011.

  1. ProudCheater

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    Looks nice, i like the text. Its simple enough to work.
     
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    Well I have some business design experience, and this isn't a good logo for a brand. A logo is usually only typographical or image based, and by making it both you aren't making a connection with people as a logo should connect with its customer base. Also you have sort of sent a mixed message with the colors and the shapes, you have a military like stencil font in a red color but rounded images. Which is Manly vs. Soft, because in a logo color and shape tell the entire story.
     
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    Added new Siggy I made.
     
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    Honestly, you should avoid using that typeface :) It's a little redundant, and those rounded serifs are tacky...
    Also, when using text in this sort of situation you should try and use only a slight outline stroke - literally 1-2px max, and then lessen the opacity of it to about 60-70%.
     
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