First time doing some GFX in a while.. I really don't like the render used, but couldn't find any good ones. Note: Will most-likely change it a bit over the weekend.
Well, I do like how the render isn't centered. Good job there, but the problem is there is no effects but the text, a little displacement looking stuff, and soft brushing. I would say use a larger render and work on basic effects. Check this tut out: