Boredom= at it again

Idc if you hate lol

 

I thought it looked quite nice Jason.
I'm not graphics junkie though.

 

I find the text stands out a bit too much for my taste.
Its awesome apart from that, though.

 

well thank you both haha
I did this in like 15 minutes so the text is kinda just thrown in

 

Just as I told someone earlier today, it is ruined by the centered focal. The centered focal doesn't work here, and it is really a basic foundations of tagging that you don't center a focal. As for the effects, there are none discernible, no lighting, no depth, and limited flow if any. The colors clash terribly, you might as well just brush a a bunch over a render, sharpen, and text slap it.

Work on your basic composition.

 

They Both look good, But i like the 2nd one More Goodjob jason.

 

haha I thought the colors clash in a way that works though idk alot of people seem to like it and its just a simple 15 minute throwie I stopped trying so hard cause there is never any feedback so why bother haha

 

Yeah, I try to give good feedback. Keep trying and if I see you around then I will give you feedback.

 

I kind of agree. I think the focal needs to be center right. As the direction flows up and left in a way. The render also seems to just be monochrome. I think the hardest part about making a signature for me (next to the text) is making the render blend, but not just be a piece of the background.