A Smile to Never Forget

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A Smile to Never Forget
  1. Unread #1 - Sep 16, 2011 at 9:26 AM
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    A Smile to Never Forget

    I walk a thousand miles a day just to find myself again.
    My time has always been stained to make my invidious memory's run over and over again.
    Wearing these crowns of thorns, a divine feeling I once felt when my brother was always smiling at me.
    I put one knee down and glance at this beautiful rock with tearful carvings.
    The cold sensation I feel on my hand when I touch this tomb, reminds me of that needle piercing snow my brother once threw at me.
    It's still a little hard to say, whats going on with this shadow that follows me all the way.
    My happiness falls deep down into this poem, while I step closer everyday to my bro.
    Tears roll down my eyes, knowing I couldn't be there to stand up like a Guardian Angel or as your loving Brother.
    The promise I made Brother, will always be kept, the needles will not be piercing my cold voided soul.
    Laying down in this isolated place I once hated, the cold bars, the bared window, will always make me hate myself for missing out on you.
    Please don't worry I am doing fine, I just wish I could have a last meet.
    Every time I hit the bottom of the bottle, I see your smiles in your frowns.
    I can keep writing and writing this poem over again, but my demons will always get me.
    Sitting on my porch, my packs fly by so fast like when me and you ran from the police when we were younger.
    My soul will always be in this beautiful blackbox confined, I'll be coming to see you soon bro.
    The love for you I have will always have a tight grip in my hands.
    I love you brother, and you will always be remembered as my Best friend.


    By Lawlbud
     
  3. Unread #2 - Sep 16, 2011 at 9:32 AM
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    Sorry for your loss
     
  5. Unread #3 - Sep 16, 2011 at 9:35 AM
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    It's fine Chuck.
    Thank you for reading my poem.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Sep 16, 2011 at 9:51 AM
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    Thats amazing mate, sorry for your loss.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Sep 16, 2011 at 9:53 AM
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    very nice poem man!
    veryy sorry for your loss ;:)(
     
  11. Unread #6 - Sep 16, 2011 at 9:55 AM
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    Thank you everyone, your post really means alot to me!
     
  13. Unread #7 - Sep 16, 2011 at 11:16 AM
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    A really nice poem and I'm sorry to hear about your loss.
     
  15. Unread #8 - Sep 16, 2011 at 12:29 PM
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    thank you cool:)
     
  17. Unread #9 - Sep 16, 2011 at 12:31 PM
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    Ive lost my brother too, 1 year ago. Feeling ya 100% buddy. Sorry for the loss.
     
  19. Unread #10 - Sep 16, 2011 at 12:34 PM
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    Very touching poem
     
  21. Unread #11 - Sep 16, 2011 at 1:13 PM
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    Thank you so much everyone! If you want to donate for my brother I would be so happy!
    all the money is going to the seattle cemetary!
    I need alots to go for his funeral.
     
  23. Unread #12 - Sep 16, 2011 at 2:10 PM
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    It touched my heart it's a very beautiful poem full of feelings, congratulations..
     
  25. Unread #13 - Sep 16, 2011 at 2:12 PM
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    thank you diego means alot to me
     
  27. Unread #14 - Sep 16, 2011 at 3:05 PM
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    Very nice poem. I'm sure your bro would really appreciate that :)
     
  29. Unread #15 - Sep 16, 2011 at 7:00 PM
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    Thank you :D
     
  31. Unread #16 - Sep 16, 2011 at 7:22 PM
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    Very well written poem, you can feel emotion from it. I'm sorry for your loss.
     
  33. Unread #17 - Sep 16, 2011 at 10:13 PM
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    Snazzy. Your bro really die?
     
  35. Unread #18 - Sep 16, 2011 at 10:51 PM
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    Nostalgia poem

    beauty stuff missing always the biggest regret in ther world.But the end of this, the beginning or other.
     
  37. Unread #19 - Sep 16, 2011 at 10:53 PM
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    No silly, he is accepting burial donations for the piece of paper that he wrote the poem on. :noworry:


    Such a strong poem. Sorry for your loss.:(
     
  39. Unread #20 - Sep 16, 2011 at 11:38 PM
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    Nice poem and sorry for your loss. Just curious as to how he passed
     
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