--MarlaSINGER.... [SIG]

Soo... I was bored. Used a fight club stock.. this is what I got..

 

Looks awesome man.

8/10

Not overly keen on the text however.

 

eh...

 

Sweet!

 

I like it, however, I think the bokeh on the left side of it shouldn't be there, it should be either completely black or gray just like on the right side.

 

floating head

never place the focal in the middle of the canvas (rule of thirds research it)

colours are unintersting

no depth, in fact, the background is sharper than the render.

that smudging on her chest is abysmal

overcontrasted render/no lighting

never write a speech on your tag, remove that text

those circles make my eyes dance across the canvas, which is distracting. You should have blurred them. They don't really make for nice effects, though.

you shouldn't have effects so close to the focal unless they are blurred out or in the distance.

dont mess with vertical text yet, remove your name and place it somewhere else horizontally. read up on text theory and practice it.


this tut it fucking awesome and helped me so much when i was starting out as it covers render choice, lighting, composition, depth, flow, text and colour
http://alpine.brainkiller.be/Resources/Fullsigtut_techniques.png

dont be a fag and take my advise

 

nice crit you gaylord

 

Not neccesary, Surj.

 

come at me bro

 

why was my first post infracted for flaming/discriminatory remarks?

its called constructive criticism, something your post was lacking. Not setting a very good example are we?

 

I posted my CnC on here, there wasn't that much else that I could remark on it.
I liked all of it but the Bokeh, so I posted that.
Also; Calling anybody a gaylord isn't that good of an example either, so mind it? Don't start a flame war on this thread and just live on peacefully, thanks.

 

Not bad Keep it up

 

Oh wow.. I missed all of this..

Its a very intense light flare.. =[

 

Looks alot like Bokeh, still, how does it look without?