Serenity

Below, you guys like it?

 

It's okay IMO.

The text stands out too much since it's on the face and you added a drop shadow. It takes away from the focal, which appears to be that butterfly looking C4D instead of the face. ._. Also, what is that gray shtuff in the corners supposed to be?

 

I would recommended that you stay away from using vector brush sets, instead concentrate on composition and placement of elements such as C4D, effect stocks and textures.

 

Brushes? I didn't use any
I did use C4D's. All the effects ARE C4Ds.

 

I think he was talking about your first signature. ._."

 

Very nice keep up the great work.

 

I like the second one a lot. I like how you used c4d to bring out my favorite color. If I happen to need a banner or something, I just might come to you.

 

oh.. shit.

Didn't see that lol.

I suggest making the focal point much smaller to improve composition.

and try introducing more colours. I like the idea of putting the wireframes onto the face, maybe you can make it look realistic if you transformed it so that it curves along the facial structure of your render.

 

I like how you think.

Thanks for the feedback guys.

 

Looks good. I think the wire frames should be blended in better.. or drawing more grid over the face/fading over, and the grids in the bottom right corner could go.. jus MO. great work though

 

It's reached the maximum size now lol