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Bored 13 Year Old
  1. Unread #1 - Jun 20, 2011 at 5:23 PM
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    Yeah, I got bored, so I made this.

    V1: [​IMG]

    V2: [​IMG]

    V3: [​IMG]

    Edit: just realized the two names aren't aligned.... time to go fix that.

    Re-edit: Fixed and changed border to yellow because gray wasn't really working for me.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jun 20, 2011 at 5:50 PM
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    That's pretty neat, the colors really work together. Is that a certain font or your own pentooling?
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jun 20, 2011 at 5:59 PM
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    It's two fonts actually. The 'SEXY' is made up of a font called 'Slant', and the 'GFX NOW' was made up of a font called 'Amputa Bangiz'. I'm too nooby to create my own fonts yet. :p
     
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    It's nice, but nothing special, as of course it didn't take long:p
    I don't like the bottom text, just the "sexy" part.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jun 20, 2011 at 6:16 PM
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    Thanks. The bottom text does seem kind of boring, but I don't really have any ideas that would make it better without it getting overboard.

    Edit: Added a second version. Forgot about the border. ._.
     
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    Just remove the bottom text and evenly center the "sexy"
     
  13. Unread #7 - Jun 20, 2011 at 6:40 PM
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    I don't know, it seems kind of empty. ._.

    [​IMG]
     
  15. Unread #8 - Jun 20, 2011 at 7:29 PM
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    I agree, without the 'GFX NOW' text it's very empty. The 'GFX NOW' text is rather boring compared tot he 'SEXY' text. Try adding some of the effects you have on the 'SEXY' text to the 'GFX NOW' test, or take away some of the effects from the 'SEXY' text. They are way to contrast of one another.
     
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    Added a third version.
     
  19. Unread #10 - Jun 20, 2011 at 7:45 PM
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    Nice, bro. This proves age doesn't matter for talent. Keep practicing and you'll get even better.
     
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    Thanks a lot!

    (besides the fact that I've been doing this on and off for 3 years :D)
     
  23. Unread #12 - Jun 20, 2011 at 11:08 PM
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    You'd obviously change the borders to around half to where the main text takes up 80% of the vertical blank space.

    Also, the third version is the best you're shown.
     
  25. Unread #13 - Jun 21, 2011 at 12:18 AM
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    Well V3 is probably my favorite. Nice progression from each version.
     
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    Version 3 is a lot better. Looks really nice.
     
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    Alright, thanks for all of your criticism. :D Makes me want to make more because you're like the only forum that just says 'omg beautiful 10/10'.
     
  31. Unread #16 - Jun 21, 2011 at 8:14 AM
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    That's because almost everyone here is inexperienced with graphics; Its a good thing mostly, its a nice confidence boost.
     
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    Most of the "harsh" critics have gone.
    I'm not brutally honest, but I speak my mind.
    If you're looking for a ball-buster, head over to a 100% graphics community.
    You'll miss us:D
     
  35. Unread #18 - Jun 21, 2011 at 3:26 PM
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    Great i love it maybe next time though you could add some like pictures in it?
     
  37. Unread #19 - Jun 21, 2011 at 4:50 PM
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    Well... what pictures would I exactly put in that wouldn't make it look screwed up? ._.
     
  39. Unread #20 - Jun 21, 2011 at 8:10 PM
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    Very nice. The only thing I don't like about it is the 'W'
    It looks odd to me.
     
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