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It.
  1. Unread #1 - May 21, 2011 at 12:14 AM
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    (This poem is meant to be spoken in a whisper..)

    Don't close your eyes..

    Don't part those lips.

    Don't let everything we have...

    slip.

    Don't leave me.

    Please,

    don't go.

    Don't throw me on the ground...

    Don't call me a "ho".

    Hold me tighter.

    Kiss me sweeter.

    Don't hold back.

    Shh...

    Don't close those eyes.

    Don't part your lips.

    I know whats coming.

    I knew it the day you took my hand off your hip.

    You don't have to say what's unspoken.

    Just leave.

    And don't come back.

    The grass is greener on the other side, say some.

    So you don't have to worry about me dieing a virgin..

    Because as someone once said:

    "In the end...

    ...life fucks us all."


    Written ENTIRELY by me, Kylie. :D Tell me what you think.
     
  3. Unread #2 - May 21, 2011 at 12:17 AM
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    I honestly had an eye orgasm i almost cried i shall whisper this to my girlfriend
     
  5. Unread #3 - May 21, 2011 at 12:20 AM
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    Mindblown. I'm ecstatic about this shit. Nice.
     
  7. Unread #4 - May 21, 2011 at 12:47 AM
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    Thank you guys a shit ton. :) I really appreciate it.
     
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    It.

    Also, could someone help me come up with a title for this? "It" just doesn't fit. Much appreciated :D
     
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    You, sir, are amazing.
     
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