Could anyone check the grammar on this essay?

Hello, A friend of mine wanted me to check his grammar of his essay, but since my english isn't that good, can anyone of you help me? thanks in advance.

Speech
In my speech I want to talk the pros and cons of private schools and state schools. First I want to tell the pros of private schools.

There are a couple of reasons why parents sending their children to a private school. They think the number of children in a class is too big and so the attention for every individual is too small.
In a private school there are less children in one class so there is more attention for every individual. The parents think this is better for their school performance.
Another advantage of private schools is the fact that the government don`t have to pay for the costs of these schools, because the parents pay for it.

But there are also cons of private schools. The first disadvantage is the high price you have to pay for going to a private school. State school are funded by tax-payers so the prices of these schools are lower. The price you have to pay for a private school can be 10 000 euro`s a year. The average people can`t pay this price because the earn too little money.
The most children are going to a state school and when you are the only one who goes to a private school you will lose your friends. So the most children prefer a state school.

I also prefer a state school because the price is lower and you stay in touch with your friends, what`s for me very important. And I think some state schools also reach a very high level.


Slumdog millionaire

Slumdog millionaire is a film about the teen Jamal Malik. On his eighteenth he was a contestant of the Indian version of “Who wants to be a millionaire?” In the beginning of the film you see that he`s just one question away from winning 20 million rupee`s. But when the show breaks for the night and there was only 1 question left for him, the police arrest him on suspicion of cheating. Police didn`t believe that a street kid like him knew so much. Jamal told the story of his life to prove his innocence. In every chapter of his life there happened a thing what was a key for a question in the show. His mother died so he grew up with is brother Salim in the slums of Mumbai. They met a girl called Malika, who also lost her parents. The 3 children met Maman, a man who wants the children go beg for him. But when Jamal saw that Maman wants to make them blind, so they earn more money, they get-away from Maman. Only Malika wasn`t able to get-away from Maman so they lost her. After a time Jamal wanted to search for Malika because he had feeling for her. They found Malika and saw she was a prostitute now. Salim killed Maman with a gun. Malika and Salim followed the gangster Javed and they separated from Jamal. After a couple of years, when Jamal worked in a call-centre, he saw the name of his brother in the register and called him. This was the end of the flashback of his life and the film continues with last question in the show. For this question Jamal called his brother and Malika picked up the phone. Malika said she was all-right, but Salim died because he killed Javed and so helpers of javed killed him.
Jamal answered the question right and won 20 million rupee`s. He reunites with Malika and they fell in love.

I chose this film because I really feel with Jamal. He had a tough life but in the end his life helped him with answering the question in the show. Almost every part of the film is exciting so you watch the film with attention.

The head characters in the film is Jamal, played by Dev Patel in early stage of life and Ayush Mahesh Khedekar at the end of the film.
The film is produced by Danny Boyle.

 

Next time, you'd be better off posting it here in the Homework Help section.


Speech
In my speech I want to talk the pros and cons of private schools and state schools. First I want to tell the pros of private schools.

There are a couple of reasons why parents sending their children to a private school. They think the number of children in a class is too big and so the attention for every individual is too small.
In a private school there are fewer children in one class so there is more attention for every individual. The parents think this is better for their school performance.
Another advantage of private schools is the fact that the government don`t have to pay for the costs of these schools, because the parents pay for it.

But there are also cons of private schools. The first disadvantage is the high price you have to pay for going to a private school. State school are funded by tax-payers so the prices of these schools are lower. The price you have to pay for a private school can be 10 000 euro`s a year. The average people can`t pay this price because they earn too little money.
The most children are going to a state school and when you are the only one who goes to a private school you will lose your friends. So the most children prefer a state school.
Wrong and would consider revising.

I also prefer a state school because the price is lower and you stay in touch with your friends, what`s for me very important. And I think some state schools also reach a very high level.
Lower cost > education?


Slumdog millionaire

Slumdog millionaire is a film about the teen Jamal Malik. On his eighteenth he was a contestant of the Indian version of “Who wants to be a millionaire?” In the beginning of the film you see that he`s just one question away from winning 20 million rupee`s. But when the show breaks for the night and there was only 1 question left for him, the police arrest him on suspicion of cheating. Police didn`t believe that a street kid like him knew so much. Jamal told the story of his life to prove his innocence. In every chapter of his life there happened a thing what was a key for a question in the show. His mother died so he grew up with is brother Salim in the slums of Mumbai. They met a girl called Malika, who also lost her parents. The 3 children met Maman, a man who wants the children go beg for him. But when Jamal saw that Maman wants to make them blind, so they earn more money, they get-away from Maman. Only Malika wasn`t able to get-away from Maman so they lost her. After a time Jamal wanted to search for Malika because he had feeling for her. They found Malika and saw she was a prostitute now. Salim killed Maman with a gun. Malika and Salim followed the gangster Javed and they separated from Jamal. After a couple of years, when Jamal worked in a call-centre, he saw the name of his brother in the register and called him. This was the end of the flashback of his life and the film continues with last question in the show. For this question Jamal called his brother and Malika picked up the phone. Malika said she was all-right, but Salim died because he killed Javed and so helpers of javed killed him.
Jamal answered the question right and won 20 million rupees. He reunites with Malika and they fell in love.

I chose this film because I really feel with Jamal. He had a tough life but in the end his life helped him with answering the question in the show. Almost every part of the film is exciting so you watch the film with attention.

The head/main or lead characters in the film is Jamal, played by Dev Patel in early stage of life and Ayush Mahesh Khedekar at the end of the film.
The film is produced by Danny Boyle.


I only used Microsoft Word spell check, but personally your use of English is IMO a grade 9 standard in a 12 grade spectrum. I would suggest trying to develop your use of the English language, it would make your life much easier through your progressing years of English.

 

I would have private pastebinned this so it didn't cache in google. Most teachers check google for paragraphs to check for plagiarism.

 

I'm bored as shit so i'll re-write it for you as best as i can, idc if you send it to your friend or not.





Speech
In my speech I am going to talk the pros and cons of private schools, and state schools.

Firstly, I will be talking about the pros of private schools.

There are a couple of reasons why a parent would want to send their children to a private school; They may think that the amount of children in a state school class is too large, thus resulting in the children getting less attention. Of course in a private school this would be the opposite. The parents think this is better for their child's school performance.
Another advantage of private schools is the fact that the government don't have to pay for the costs of these schools, because the parents pay for it, resulting in more money going to other vital things.

However, there are of course downsides to private education. The first disadvantage is the high price you have to pay to go to a private school. State schools are funded by tax-payers, so the prices of these schools are lower. Private schools can cost anything up to 30,000 euro's per year, now the average people can not pay this as they earn too little money.
There are more children attending state schools, so some children may prefer to go to a state school as they think they could have more friends.

I also prefer a state school because the price is lower and you stay in touch with your friends, which for me is very important. Also, I think that people do not need to go to a private school to perform well.


Slumdog millionaire

Slumdog millionaire is a film about the teen Jamal Malik. On his eighteenth he was a contestant of the Indian version of “Who wants to be a millionaire?” In the beginning of the film you see that he`s just one question away from winning 20 million rupee`s. However, when the show breaks for the night and there was only 1 question left for him, the police arrest him on suspicion of cheating. Police didn`t believe that a street kid like him knew so much. Jamal told the story of his life to prove his innocence. In every chapter of his life, something happened to him which was key for answering a question in the show. His mother died so he grew up with is brother Salim in the slums of Mumbai. They met a girl called Malika, who also lost her parents. The 3 children met Maman, a man who wants the children to beg for him. When Jamal saw that Maman wanted to blind them, so they earn more money, they escape from Maman. Only Malika wasn`t able to escape from Maman, resulting in them losing her. After a time Jamal wanted to search for Malika as he had feelings for her. They found Malika and saw she was a prostitute now. Salim killed Maman with a gun. Malika and Salim followed the gangster Javed and they separated from Jamal. After a couple of years, when Jamal worked in a call-centre, he saw the name of his brother in the register and called him. This was the end of the flashback of his life and the film continues with last question in the show. For this question Jamal called his brother and Malika picked up the phone. Malika said she was all-right, but Salim died because he killed Javed and so helpers of javed killed him.
Jamal answered the question right and won 20 million rupee`s. He reunites with Malika and they fell in love.

I chose this film because I really feel with Jamal. He had a tough life but in the end his life helped him with answering the question in the show. Almost every part of the film is exciting so you watch the film with attention.

The head characters in the film is Jamal, played by Dev Patel in early stage of life and Ayush Mahesh Khedekar at the end of the film.
The film is produced by Danny Boyle.






(I stopped editing half way through the slumdog review (sorry i got bored)