Freestyle[2]Rate.

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Freestyle[2]Rate.
  1. Unread #1 - Mar 20, 2011 at 12:12 AM
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    Freestyle[2]Rate.

    Enjoy.
    Did i miss it, explicit, too much on the radar to diss it
    list it, on my balls cause you can't fix it
    sending tremors just go check the richter scale
    high as hell, foot on my pivot make the world derail
    thought the institution would be my execution
    god knows i was the only fucking solution
    no need to reduce em when you always abuse em
    you was on some lynching so why the fuck loose em
    chasin tail, losing bail, drink so much til my liver fail
    watching all the poverty, living through an oddysy
    living through comradries while driving up a prodigy
    do you correctly roger me, never manned up to father me
    the only thing i got in the city is the heart of me
    banging out on them streets followed by cease fires
    but you shoutin nigga's like you an imitatation of richard pryor
    don't go there boy, don't play with fire,
    shoutin out them lyric's like a fucking liar, saying you got hope
    but no fucking desire
    just wishing people would see my vision
    like that secret fucking recipe hidin in your kitchen
    said i sold my soul to the devil but i was just on a mission
    relive my creativity as you envisioned me like a fucking mystery
    history, when i die no one will be missing me
    set up my last supper, while these envying fucks
    hate me undercover, prob got the 9 in the duffle covered in some rubber
    get re-acquainted with the greatest, victory is a bitch and i know i'll never make this.

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  3. Unread #2 - Mar 20, 2011 at 12:15 AM
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    Freestyle[2]Rate.

    6/10, good for something thrown together fast.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Mar 20, 2011 at 12:16 AM
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    Freestyle[2]Rate.

    Nice flow. Could you deliver it though? I would like to hear you rap it. Vocabulary could use some work, future goals though.
     
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