Check out me and my boys rap. Feedback appreciated!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=opMXaSWKTz8



Thanks y'aaaall.

 

Which are you?
Not a huge fan of the "I'm the shit and I got a ton of bitches." concept of rap.

1. He kept pausing, work on the flow.
Has potential.

2. Good flow.
Should be in Hip Hop instead of "Swag" Rap imo.

3. Decent flow.


I'm not too interested in the "shit son I'm the shit." lyrics.
I'm more into like, A Tribe Called Quest and all that.

But if you like that style of music, go for it man.

 

Appreciate the feedback man. I went first.

And yeah, flow and delivery is my weak point, but I'm working on it.

 

Not bad . If the quality would be better i might even download it. I m no expert but i think u and ur boys should keep rapping. I listen a lot of this kinda music and me personally liked it.

 

^ Really appreciate it, man.

 

you gotta earn respect before you call yourself the king.. besides that keep workin hard you'll flow will get better.

 

Yeah ha. That's just an inside joke with my friends really. Xbox live name used to be King Jarman.

 

It's good, just try and update your quality!

 

pretty hurtin , but youll get better

 

Pretty good, just bad quality. I also think the beat is good.

 

Was this thought out, or random? The flow needs works, and quality. Overtime I believe you guys can go big, if you plan to.

 

Thanks man.

Appreciate the feedback.

Thanks. We're working on the quality.

I don't really know what you mean by random. But yeah, I'm working on the flow, etc. Getting some more equipment too.

 

Flows pretty well IMO.

 

not bad.

 

Nice but the quality
wich of them is you?