Everyone who was hatin on my rap vids....watch this now.

So you guys all wanna hate on my vids, well heres something I conjured up for you fuckers so you can see what I can really do.
Can't defeat us.mp3

 

learn to not use voice edit programs, and its pretty shit tbh...

 

sorry, but it sounds like your strangling a dog underwater.


in other news..

that was shit.

 

This you bro?

 

Lmaoo this is worse then soulja boy!! But i love the attempt, try again ill deff listen to it!

 

Yup lol

And albania, I appreciate you not being a dickhead
I'll post the finished product friday, this was a rough copy

 

Ok cool, I actually like it!

 

Lol thank you. I love to hear people say they like my stuff

 

I think it would sound better without the auto-tune.

 

Lol it's different for everyone

 

yeah, lose the auto tune.. people who do this are just supporting the
D.O.A... Death of Auto-tune. The only people who could properly use Auto tune
was Roger and Zapp in the 80's. It has been abused and raped in recent times.
So I reckon it'd sound better without the auto tune.

All i can say is, practice and you can only get better.

 

Thank you for your advice ^^

 

instead of everyone hating on this, why don't poeple give constructive criticism?

OT:

I like it nice job

 

Cons:
Auto-Tune
Lil Wayne beat
Pausing between flows.
Use of the N word.

Do NOT.
Do NOT copy someone else's style.
That is considered biting, and you're trying to be someone else rather than yourself... which is looked down upon.

Learn to flow better.
Also, I don't know what you're saying.

Hiphop has turned into people thinking they can talk about "swag" and stuff.
No. Hip hop is about speaking poetry with lyrics.

And listen to how Slick Rick's lyrics merge with the beat in this song.

Learn from your history, do not learn from the present.



If you consider my post as hate, you shouldn't even be rapping.
Cause there are people WORSE than me.

 

All your doing is talking in rhymes, auto tuning your voice and adding a beat. Is there really any skill here...? It also doesn't even sound decent...I can't believe you even mentioned Lil Wayne.

 

Its alright but would beb etter if it was a black guy

 

Lol?
What does race have to do with anything?
It's just the way you present yourself.

Like your ghetto-looking sig.
And you're name being Canadian.

Hence you're probably a tryhard white kid.
Right?

 

This wasn't awful.
Keep trying.
Lose the autotune.

 

I don't think you need to autotune the entire thing, just parts. Try Adobe Soundbooth CS5.

 

Auto.Tone. not bad tho bro