I like what you did with the text on this one. But it's a little over sharpened. Try using some BOKEH light effects a little more and try to use higher quality nebula's for stars. The guy right now is over sharpened/topazed and ruins the quality/depth of it IMO. Really work the text as it has some potential in it. Blur it/lower the optacity on it a tad. KIU mate.
I like where your getting here, i just don't like the red in it. a army green would be cool ^_^ nice work anyways