2 new ones!

Hey guys, been away from gfx a while. Haven't dared to try anything with color since my comp isn't the best atm!

http://img707.imageshack.us/i/fag1g.png/
http://img291.imageshack.us/i/fag2.png/

 

the first one (halo) isn't that great. effects are scattered and my eyes are searching for a focal point which it can't really find.

On the second hand the uncharted one is pretty nice but i think it would look better if you got rid of the scan lines on the left portion of the tag. I like what you did with the inverted boarder thing and included the text in the concept of it. Right now you don't really have a distinct light source or flow. Just two things you need to work on

KIU

 

Yeah, I also think the render on the second one doesnt blend in that well... Oh well . Ty for the cc!

 

First is chaotic - the effects are messy, the light sources aren't correct in terms of the focal point/render, and the bottom 5px line (or whatever that is) doesn't really blend well.

Second is also messy, with an incredibly large chunk of negative space on the left, which you've simply tried fill with scan lines, which kill depth.

Protip; try use wireframes instead of scan lines, you (most of the time) get a better result.

 

change text on the second and remove black line. use wireframes instead of scan lines and try to balance the brightness/contrast , levels and such.
make the canvas thinner and move the big pack of c4ds down a bit. oh and your lighting doesn't make sense.

im expecting a v2