Composition's quite interesting, though it looks strange with only one side c4d spammed, and the other a plain brick wall (the horizontal brick lines don't really flow either). Text isn't very good - placement and all is, though it could be elaborated in design and interest. You're getting much better though, KIU
c4d spam both sides/use another interesting stock etc. The way it is, there's too much negative space with no effects or anything.
