[insert catchy title to get people's attention here]!!!!

Rate and/or CnC pleaseeeeee!

a lil darker version

i wanted to do more but idk what, maybe some pentooling or somthing...?

 

First off, can I ask how new you are to graphics?

Some CnC:
Text needs a bit of work, try using a font that suits the signature a little more, I know that's hard to do if you are knew to graphics. There are a few tutorials around, and if I get time I'll look some up for you. The text should also be somewhat of a standout in your sig, but it shouldn't overpower the main focal.
The lighting isn't too bad in some spots, but that's also something you should look into. It's also another thing that's hard to get right, every time. Not sure if you've used a black soft brush for the shading on the edges, or if you've used the lighting filter on photoshop, but I'm not liking that too much either, especially how it's set up (focal>shading/lighting attempt>dead black border).

Having said all that, it's not bad (if you are a beginner).
Look up some decent tutorials, maybe even try some stuff a little more difficult to boost them there skills.

Also, I'm hatin' on the border massive style, son.

Don't penistool it. Please.

 

haha "penistool"
and i dont think im a beginner but im not a pro either. Intermediate would be the right category.
Thx for the honest critic, it feels a little brutal but gotta take it like man.

My text always suck, but if you can please PM a font pack or link some good fonts.

DONT CALL MEH A BEGINNAH OMIGAWD AHHH I KILL YOUZ.

 

A little bit too much going on, imo.

Dial it back a tad on the space stocks, and keep the lighter version.
Colors could be mixed better, try some more gradients.
And yeah- fix or just get rid of- the text.
KiU

 

Nice text is the focal...Oh shit theres a wolf over there

just saying

 

begginer.

have you seen intermediate?

 

It's too over contrasted.

Try to avoid using text that distracts from the wanted focal point of the tag also.

KIU

 

If he did as much work as it looks like he did he's not a begginer unless it's just a bg a render some adjustments and text but I bet he built the bg.

if he did he is intermediate

have you seen intermediate?

 

Mate, Don't argue he knows what he is talking about. He is improving nonetheless and will continue to until he decides to quit. Go to planet renders or fringe and ask some one to class you that knows what there talking about and they will tell you the same thing surj did. He is beginner. There is no one on this forum that posts in the GFX section thats above high mod and thats alt and tr1ble.

 

If you've got any problems, bring it to the callout section!

But seriously, it's kinda dead over there :s

And remember, it's CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

 

I'm Begintermediate!

Thank you sir!

Grrrrrrrr!

and thx for feedback mates!

 

kk sorry bro

sorry chiraag2000 I have to take that back you are in fact a beginner

 

Straight up beginerness.
It's not a bad thing, though. You're progressing, so you can't ask for much. It's the same for everyone, no one is singling you out, or anything, that's just how it is.

I know when I say something it may come off as dickish/extremely dickish, but it's something you have to learn to deal with. You have to take the criticism that you're given, and then try and improve on those things in your next piece.
Oh, if you don't do that, then I'll fucking stab you.
Haha, nah, I wouldn't do that.
But seriously, I will.

 

oh shi!

and again thx for the feedback everyone.
i havent taken anything personally lol