Ralts - a tag

This was a fun one to do
I think it turned out well, but I usually do, then when I look back at it after I while, I usually see a bunch of errors xD

But yeah, CC Plox <3
IK text could be improved Direct me to some resources if you know any

 

This tag has some real potential, MAJOR potential for you're skill level.

Behind the render darken it and do some more smudging like you have in the foreground to create more depth.

Get rid of the text completely.

Burn the sides of the tag to draw more attention to the center of the tag where I'm guessing you want the focal to be.

KIU.

 

Couldn't come up with any good smudge settings, so I used a bunch of cloud stocks xD [the easy way out]

But thanks a bunch for the advice. Might work on it tomorrow, as I just made this to keep from doing homework

 

Good work, but the problem i see is my focal point is in the uper right quadrent like say....

[====] <-- thats the tag. [=w===] <-W = words, but the focal is [===^=] <- i have to look for the text >.>

 

Well the focal point isn't the text..................

Nice tag justin, im really liking this one. looks smexy.

 

Thanks much all

Will post an updated version later..

 

tl;dr
(joke) , well it seems perfectly fine except for the text, it is too small,font doesn't fit there.

 

lower the contrast slightly and put those bubbles and stars nearer to the focal and use them to create flow.