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experiment
  1. Unread #1 - Nov 9, 2010 at 3:46 PM
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    experiment

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    I don't really like it :/
     
  3. Unread #2 - Nov 9, 2010 at 4:49 PM
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    experiment

    I actually like this but the lighting of the character completely throws the tag off.

    Try adding a bit a depth by blurring some stuff and sharpening the focal.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Nov 10, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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    very good if you are new to it:D
     
  7. Unread #4 - Nov 10, 2010 at 1:46 PM
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    experiment

    Do you even have a clue what you are saying?
     
  9. Unread #5 - Nov 10, 2010 at 3:14 PM
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    experiment

    Oooh. It's great but I don't think the colors quite match up?

    Also the crop on the left side look's weird.

    Like your idea though,


    PS: I haven't done any GFX so dont call me a noob or nub neeb or neeblet.

    Thanks.
     
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    experiment

    Seems flat :S

    I think it would look better without the imgs on the left side.

    Other than that, burn and lighten some stuff ;)
     
  13. Unread #7 - Nov 13, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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    experiment

    I like it Trey.

    I think it would look better without the other pic of her face on the left side. A little bit more blending would be cool too. Other then that, very nice.
     
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    experiment

    lighting makes no sense
    colours need improving
    remove that thing on the left side
    remove circle and line
    composition is wrong

    dont just put a whole c4d on, experiment with layer styles and try to use certain parts of different c4ds to create flow and depth.
     
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