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Poem
  1. Unread #1 - Nov 10, 2010 at 2:20 AM
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    Kinda a Poem not really, Just what I am feeling ATM.

    We are living an Ocean apart
    I wish I could swim to your hart
    Your Horizon is my Dusk
    we see the same moon (Your night my day)
    I want to be your Superman
    But I cant be today.

    We can drop tears
    For years, ohh the fears
    Hard to forget you eyes
    No Lies, Lots of Cries
    The Ocean!
    Its to far for both our emotion!
     
  3. Unread #2 - Nov 10, 2010 at 3:36 AM
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    did you write this yourself?
     
  5. Unread #3 - Nov 10, 2010 at 9:06 PM
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    Yer, its kinda sad to me.
     
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    i like it, its like love should but can't. Nice job =)
     
  9. Unread #5 - Nov 11, 2010 at 2:53 PM
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    This is really good; really deep and meaningful. You should write more!
     
  11. Unread #6 - Nov 11, 2010 at 8:54 PM
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    Thanks.

    Thanks, It just sotta comes to me when I think of un explainable stuff...

    Like: Chicken or Egg? What could have come first?
     
  13. Unread #7 - Nov 14, 2010 at 11:49 PM
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    Nice man!! i like it.
     
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